Friday, March 15, 2013

Time can be a fog.


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Time can be a fog.
Glimpses, memories
Vividly dance across
Singing loudly the love and joy you shared.

Fog can be a time
a moment too much to bear
shrouded into silent darkness.



Photo credit:   BĂ©renger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND

8 comments:

  1. I love the way you've switched the wording to change the meaning here! Clever, and very well done!

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  2. time can be a fog
    fog can be a time

    sigh - very nice

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  3. The switch is so cool. Lovely piece!

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  4. So much here. Like a lot!

    Here's my take on the prompt. http://debbiesdays.wordpress.com/2013/03/15/blue-sky-invasion/

    ( couldn't find an option to post with open ID or Wordpress)

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  5. Love the two polarities & how you have made them interchangeable:-)

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  6. This is what I call a juxtaposition. Excellent.

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  7. Time as fog... fog as time. Fascinating.

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  8. Wow I really like this, a good analogy well written.

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