Friday, June 7, 2013

Alligator Hunt

Trifecta Writing Challenge - Create a story in three sentences.

I’m on an alligator hunt. Carefully stepping over logs and through the brush, a chipmunk scurries out of sight. I think I feel a bite.
Thumbnail for version as of 23:27, 19 February 2005Alligator. By James, scubadive67 on flickr.com {{cc-by}}Source: http://www.flickr.com/photos/71217725@N00/3176098/


20 comments:

  1. Whoa.. Who's hunting whom here?? That's a damn cool post Ann dear :)

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  2. Probably not an alligator so! You'd definitely know if you were bitten by one of those!

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  3. Alligator Alley??? The last line was perfect, "I think I feel a bite." OUCH!

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  4. Oh, my! I don't believe I'd want to go hunting for that :)

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  5. The alligator just tasted ......

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  6. Alligators like the taste of bug spray.

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  7. Hopefully from a chipmunk and not a gator-though chipmunks can be aggressive. I know this from experience;) Fun story, Ann!

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  8. haha I love how he thinks he feels a bite, like it's something that has to be mulled over. "Hmmm, am I imagining those sharp teeth burying themselves into my shin?" :D

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  9. Yikes! it could be the gator biting the edge of the bait pole--watched that at a zoo once. Terrifying even from 100s of feet away.

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  10. I wonder if, in a few minutes, he'll be thinking, Why hadn't it been the chipmunk instead of me? Then again, an alligator hunter has to know what he's doing, right? Let's hope so.

    Thank you for linking up!

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  11. Maybe Bobbie Bouchier from the Waterboy should do a gator safety video.

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  12. Hahaha, this totally made me think of the old video game Pitfall

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  13. Ha! Fun. I think the chipmunk wins. :)

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  14. Not the feeling you want on an alligator hunt! Fun.

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