Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Trifecta 33 word quaint challenge.

www.trifectawritingchallenge.com was a wee too hard this week. Thirty three words using the the third definition of quaint. Oh well, I wrote it and it was thirty-three words. So here goes something.

Some may think it's quaint to faint.
They can't see the haint
With the paint of a saint
Tossing bait
To an unsuspecting mate
Who will find the taint
A little too late.


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9 comments:

  1. TMWHickmanJanuary 21, 2014 at 10:24 PM

    Yikes! Nobody likes the taint, do they? I like how you managed to rhyme everything--that took some thought!

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  2. AtreyeeJanuary 22, 2014 at 11:04 AM

    Love this quaint poem Ann-well done:-)

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  3. kymmJanuary 22, 2014 at 1:59 PM

    Aint getting no complaint from this cyber acquaint-
    ance.
    Cute!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2014 at 3:22 PM

    I can't top Kymm's comment :)

    Nice rhyming!

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  5. DraugJanuary 26, 2014 at 11:19 AM

    This is fun to read aloud.

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    1. Ann BennettJanuary 26, 2014 at 12:22 PM

      I hope you are a northerner using a fake southern accent. That would emote the depth of this ditty. lol

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  6. TrifectaJanuary 27, 2014 at 2:27 AM

    Hands down winner of rhyming this week;)

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