We are asking for a 33-word response to the following snippet:
The first time I saw. . .Here's the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each. - and this blogger's thought, Aren't Thesauruses great
www.trifectawritingchallenge.com
The first time I saw a wild dream's
truth,
I saw each yarn has a veil that shields the
real facts that glare, begs to be freed, to yield a glance at the woods and not
the trees.
That is a good piece. Well done!
ReplyDeleteTruth to the truth!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing ..
ReplyDeleteInteresting imagery.
ReplyDeleteThe woods and not the trees...
ReplyDeleteAnn, I love this piece!!
Oh such beautiful words, to see what is right in front of us, is sometimes the hardest thing
ReplyDeleteOh, such lovely words! I can't even settle on a favorite image; it's all so beautiful.
ReplyDelete...as we cry out for more simplicity but find the choices only increase...oh, your story - perfect ☺
ReplyDeleteI love this idea of a "wild dream's truth." Beautiful imagery throughout.
ReplyDeleteI like your point that we only catch a glimpse of the truth in dreams and tales told. Lovely language, Ann. Well done. :)
ReplyDeleteYou completely had me at "a wild dream's truth." As a vivid dreamer, this is definitely my favorite :-)
ReplyDelete"...yields a glance at the woods not the trees" - love this line. Nice job!
ReplyDelete"the woods and not the trees". Love this line.
ReplyDeleteWhat Gina said. Very pretty.
DeleteGreat imagery! Love the wild dream's truth in the first line :)
ReplyDeleteI like to keep those wild dreams nicely tucked behind that shield, thank you!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing ideas, Ann.
A lovely final thought. Thanks for linking up!
ReplyDelete"Wild dream's truth". Wonderful phrasing! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great work.
ReplyDeletethis is wonderful!!
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Begs to be freed. Very nice.
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