tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post3163896332377276738..comments2024-03-28T14:44:26.616-04:00Comments on so much to choose from - Ann Bennett: Ann Bennetthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-46189199338744884202013-05-03T07:30:54.857-04:002013-05-03T07:30:54.857-04:00I really like the way you showed Alex, you gave so...I really like the way you showed Alex, you gave so much information on him in such a short space. I really enjoyed it. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-49387839116041059692013-05-03T05:12:35.299-04:002013-05-03T05:12:35.299-04:00Ha!ha!Loved the tongue in cheek digs you took soc...Ha!ha!Loved the tongue in cheek digs you took society's facetious people who pretend to be someone else & how money makes most people "acceptable"-great take Ann:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-89666518399979035132013-05-02T16:04:40.895-04:002013-05-02T16:04:40.895-04:00I loved the writing style! What characters too! I loved the writing style! What characters too! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-43523437611173075282013-05-01T23:21:14.581-04:002013-05-01T23:21:14.581-04:00I'm glad his dad said ixnay to the teardrop ta...I'm glad his dad said ixnay to the teardrop tattoo. He didn't need it anyway! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-89714669599037951742013-05-01T15:43:03.467-04:002013-05-01T15:43:03.467-04:00That beak of a nose was a nice touch.That beak of a nose was a nice touch.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-10397057671603009462013-05-01T15:24:58.695-04:002013-05-01T15:24:58.695-04:00I really like how you've created this whole &q...I really like how you've created this whole "scene" with the hipsters and hangers-on and the rest of the crowd. Great writing.!lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-89611425586047750992013-05-01T08:26:21.630-04:002013-05-01T08:26:21.630-04:00This is such a fun piece Ann! You've done such...This is such a fun piece Ann! You've done such a good job painting your character. Well done!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-29954634474058127402013-05-01T07:21:46.256-04:002013-05-01T07:21:46.256-04:00Honestly, an article on the web about social climb...Honestly, an article on the web about social climbing. Thanks.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-38896809975411202052013-05-01T07:21:05.335-04:002013-05-01T07:21:05.335-04:00Thanks. Substance versus shadow, what else would a...Thanks. Substance versus shadow, what else would a writer choose.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-8664954002007010502013-05-01T07:19:45.512-04:002013-05-01T07:19:45.512-04:00While surfing the web, I read an article about soc...While surfing the web, I read an article about social climbing. People who would spend all they have to emulate the trustafarian peacocks at SXSW. All I could think was why. I have never been a part of such a high life. Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-40155565093617387232013-05-01T02:39:41.471-04:002013-05-01T02:39:41.471-04:00I loved the trustafarian peacock. Where do you ge...I loved the trustafarian peacock. Where do you get this stuff? Great read.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-62113652444650746932013-04-30T21:34:24.782-04:002013-04-30T21:34:24.782-04:00I loved it - even though I felt it coming.
small ...I loved it - even though I felt it coming.<br /><br />small typo "he was going to talks to her."<br /><br />(RogRites)BetaRuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-21745899392323936762013-04-30T18:25:53.718-04:002013-04-30T18:25:53.718-04:00Suddenly my low-key, partyless life seems much mor...Suddenly my low-key, partyless life seems much more attractive! Great dig, Ann!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-4646976534401279322013-04-30T18:22:18.922-04:002013-04-30T18:22:18.922-04:00Good thing Alex has dear old dad. He needs someone...Good thing Alex has dear old dad. He needs someone to help him rein it in until father time does it for him. I remember this old man wearing tons of gold chains trying to hang out with us during my college days. It's hard to be cool when your body prefers relaxed fit Levi jeans.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-34883711135038751082013-04-30T18:19:30.862-04:002013-04-30T18:19:30.862-04:00I know. laughs It's hard to be original when e...I know. laughs It's hard to be original when everyone else is doing it. Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-74284016738486217142013-04-30T18:18:02.695-04:002013-04-30T18:18:02.695-04:00Thanks. I have never been cool but I know what it ...Thanks. I have never been cool but I know what it looks like. laughs.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-204796846314537502013-04-30T18:17:21.447-04:002013-04-30T18:17:21.447-04:00Fixed it. Although I am a long way from being a co...Fixed it. Although I am a long way from being a contender. I enjoy reading everybody else's post and creating a story. I was a science teacher. Language arts are so good at detail which I am not.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-19488387901214660542013-04-30T18:15:38.219-04:002013-04-30T18:15:38.219-04:00It is nice to see the underdog come out on top.
It is nice to see the underdog come out on top.<br />Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-70615240848547943282013-04-30T18:14:17.811-04:002013-04-30T18:14:17.811-04:00I would like to claim it but it is urban slang. I ...I would like to claim it but it is urban slang. I understand these types are prominent at the South by Southwest film festival. Hence the idea for story. It is ironic they get a better seat than the people who create.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-14720113650546095602013-04-30T18:12:30.897-04:002013-04-30T18:12:30.897-04:00I know. I wouldn't mind the comfort of having ...I know. I wouldn't mind the comfort of having a trust fund but it is like never growing up to not support yourself.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-39062297523447731732013-04-30T17:57:49.569-04:002013-04-30T17:57:49.569-04:0042 and still living off the old parents! Not a goo...42 and still living off the old parents! Not a good way to be! Not that I'm much better!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-64220708835175687252013-04-30T14:34:18.373-04:002013-04-30T14:34:18.373-04:00Trustifarian peacock...I love it!Trustifarian peacock...I love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-21245918148173611092013-04-30T10:21:31.445-04:002013-04-30T10:21:31.445-04:00Poor Alex...he thinks he's cool :) I like tha...Poor Alex...he thinks he's cool :) I like that the 'redneck' busted into the 'to be seen' crowd.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-7341021976123825842013-04-30T04:51:35.273-04:002013-04-30T04:51:35.273-04:00Great style, atmosphere and absolutely wonderful f...Great style, atmosphere and absolutely wonderful first line!Piratehttp://yepirategunn.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-63276089003527017642013-04-29T23:05:36.737-04:002013-04-29T23:05:36.737-04:00This is an interesting piece. Just be careful--Tri...This is an interesting piece. Just be careful--Trifecta accepts the prompt word only in the form given. So maybe the plural form of door in your last line could be edited to the singular form? Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.com