tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post8139933367473906292..comments2024-03-28T14:44:26.616-04:00Comments on so much to choose from - Ann Bennett: Old Man - Trifecta Writing ChallengeAnn Bennetthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-31874379795207586932013-05-27T13:06:52.521-04:002013-05-27T13:06:52.521-04:00that was so sad. no one should have such a lot in ...that was so sad. no one should have such a lot in life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-57475538836202101442013-05-24T04:18:17.837-04:002013-05-24T04:18:17.837-04:00a sad tale. Very well written.a sad tale. Very well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-28856478978634362512013-05-23T09:39:01.296-04:002013-05-23T09:39:01.296-04:00That's so sad )': He was such a father to ...That's so sad )': He was such a father to his siblings.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-42725388293292211062013-05-23T07:40:53.640-04:002013-05-23T07:40:53.640-04:00That's heartbreaking. :-(
Remember to come b...That's heartbreaking. :-(<br /><br />Remember to come back and vote at the end, ok?Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-17800977381275169422013-05-22T21:26:11.719-04:002013-05-22T21:26:11.719-04:00Very moving. Great story. Reminds me a bit of Walt...Very moving. Great story. Reminds me a bit of Walter Cunningham jr., in To Kill a Mockingbird. (RogRites)BetaRuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-44764508952504771252013-05-22T16:00:41.133-04:002013-05-22T16:00:41.133-04:00Great story, Ann. If I read it right, you mean to ...Great story, Ann. If I read it right, you mean to say that at nineteen he was already an old man. And that's sad. Well told.Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-90289584356826280872013-05-22T10:35:11.141-04:002013-05-22T10:35:11.141-04:00Ann, I've been reading, and really enjoying Th...Ann, I've been reading, and really enjoying The Whistling Season by Ivan Doig. I think your work is very reminiscent of his-and this piece is no exception. I love how you've elevated a normally ordinary, every day setting with such a rich and heartbreaking story line! I agree, well done!!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-61144035813983845552013-05-22T10:33:49.056-04:002013-05-22T10:33:49.056-04:00Poignant. Though I didn't quite get the last l...Poignant. Though I didn't quite get the last line...I didn't sleep well either so it may be me:)Sandra Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13191775335774130719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-81653580427878055332013-05-22T07:26:25.046-04:002013-05-22T07:26:25.046-04:00Awww... poor little Charlie... sad sad story... bu...Awww... poor little Charlie... sad sad story... but kept me glued till the end. Good work Ann!September Dreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16983650544225204109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-4613649258076193202013-05-21T23:32:56.254-04:002013-05-21T23:32:56.254-04:00wow, if this is fiction, you are a POWERFUL writer...wow, if this is fiction, you are a POWERFUL writer. And it is true, then you are a great story teller. Either way, well done. <br /><br />best, <br />MOVMOVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00782183723607923501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-87486671479862089262013-05-21T21:54:59.667-04:002013-05-21T21:54:59.667-04:00Some people don't get much of a chance.Some people don't get much of a chance.chamblee54https://www.blogger.com/profile/17280870701343868626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1511550796165869351.post-78888442728908739162013-05-21T19:53:35.781-04:002013-05-21T19:53:35.781-04:00That's a tough life, and a lot of responsibili...That's a tough life, and a lot of responsibility at fifteen/sixteen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com