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Time can be a fog.Glimpses, memories
Vividly dance across
Singing loudly the love and joy you shared.
Fog can be a time
a moment too much to bear
shrouded into silent darkness.
Photo credit: BĂ©renger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND
A mix of thoughts, experiences, flash fiction, poetry and humor of Ann Bennett.
Quixotic is something that is idealistic to the point it is impractical. Somebody must have been talking about me I washed cat food cans ...
I love the way you've switched the wording to change the meaning here! Clever, and very well done!
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sigh - very nice
The switch is so cool. Lovely piece!
ReplyDeleteSo much here. Like a lot!
ReplyDeleteHere's my take on the prompt. http://debbiesdays.wordpress.com/2013/03/15/blue-sky-invasion/
( couldn't find an option to post with open ID or Wordpress)
Love the two polarities & how you have made them interchangeable:-)
ReplyDeleteThis is what I call a juxtaposition. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteTime as fog... fog as time. Fascinating.
ReplyDeleteWow I really like this, a good analogy well written.
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