A single note on the piano was all Jennifer produced. There
was no one home to hear her practice much less play. Jennifer was half an orphan. She was a senior
in high school but it was strange just checking in with dad instead of mom
hovering to see that she did everything right.
Gazing out the window,
she watched children walking home from school. Two little girls around eight were
running up to a much larger boy who was probably the same age. They looked like
little angels in their school uniform.
The angels knocked
the boy down in the flowerbed; crushing and uprooting Sam Glover’s Impatiens.
The little boy stands up and tears the chain off the posts that Glover says he
uses for decoration but is a coy reminder of the property line.
Jennifer focuses on the sheet music. She turns her head in
time to see the boy swinging the chain like a truncheon. The girls are leaning
forward taunting him. Oh, this is ridiculous; I will just open the door and
look out. They will run off.
Jennifer coolly looks from left to right at the children.
The little boy begins to wail loudly. “They goin’ ta beat me up.” Genuine tears
are flowing. The girls turn in a snit and walk away. They look back, and then
stop at the end of the road, pretend to be talking but face the poor bedeviled
boy.
Jennifer reaches in to the foyer and takes her cell phone
off a table.
“Would you like to call your mom?”
He nods his head yes. She winces as he wipes his nose with
his hand and grasps her cell phone with the same hand. Sniffling, he calls his
mother.
He is talking on the phone. Jennifer hears a woman calling down the road.
The girls are gone. His tears dry as he hands her the phone back.
“Mom.” He runs to meet the woman. Jennifer stands and watches them walk down the
road hand in hand. She pauses, reattaches the chain and replants the uprooted
flowers.
Walking back into the house, Jennifer
thinks about not practicing. She knows the music. She plays scales before playing
her mom’s favorite, the Westphalia Waltz.
The phone rings. She plans to
ignore it but the number is the one the boy dialed. There is no hello, how do
you do, just a woman telling her to mind her own business.
Jennifer starts to talk and the
woman hangs up. Fuming, she decides to call back. What does this woman mean she
is going to speak to her father?
“Hello”
It’s the boy. “Do you remember me?”
“I dunno.”
“You remember me kid. I saved you
from those two girls.”
“You did not. You lying. You
lying on me. I weren’t fighting again. Madison and Taylor are my friends.”
His mother is in the background
yelling, “Whose on the phone?”
“It’s that crazy old lady who
plays the piana.”
What an insight into the dynamics of life, that poor boy. LM x
ReplyDeleteA boy can't be cowed by anybody but his Mama. Especially by little girls. Also, no good deed goes unpunished. Mr. Glover will probably tell about his flowers, too.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
What rotten little angels! The girls were great in their haughty cruelty. I too feel sorry for that little boy, he's going to have a hard time until he is old enough to grow himself a pair.
ReplyDeleteI loved the transition from observer to participant.
Nice piece! An enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteThe sweetest set of children this side of Lord of the Flies :D What a great piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteThere is a fine line between bullying and the politic of children. You captured the ridiculousness brilliantly. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job capturing the delicate lines between friends and enemies and getting in trouble with the parents that make up childhood. It makes me sad when someone tries to be neighborly and is just judged as a trouble-maker.
ReplyDeleteAnn-I loved the last line, because it's so true! A little kid would think of a high school senior as old! I think that's hilarious, because it's so accurate! And as for that lying little rat...I'd say he's on his own next time;) Fun story, and brilliantly written in this wonderful style you have!!
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