Monday, May 12, 2014

Crawling on me

  42 word fiction response to Gargleblaster's weekly question, "Is something crawling on me?



“Old man Henry, Get out of here.”

spanish moss hanging from a tree
by the Altamaha River Georgia
“You can't throw me out CL, you know we're like family. “

“I get so tired of your talk.”

“I'll grow on you boy.”

“More like crawl under my skin.”

10 comments:

  1. You are definitely a master of dialogue. Very nice.

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  2. I know the feeling...

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  3. Great little story - I really enjoyed the different voices. Thanks for linking it up!

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  4. Oh I LOVE the conversational voices...

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  5. Nice! I love the dialogue.

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  6. Wonderfully clear voices! < 3

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  7. Hit the nail,didn't he?Some people-they do love to get under our skin,no?Good job with the prompt as always Ann :-)

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  8. You've got the dialog thing down!

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