A mix of thoughts, experiences, flash fiction, poetry and humor of Ann Bennett.
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Mistakes that almost make me say something.
Sweetie Pie pilfering cat food. She swears the cat food fell into her mouth.. These are mistakes I have been guilty of that I get the urge t...

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I’ve been to the bridge where the water overflowed. The road with swirling eddies and an ice cold grip Steadying my step the river ca...
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There are few stories as touching as Silas Marner which is the story of a man afflicted with seizures who finds a foundling. The child saves...
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Across the road from a diner a neon sign flashes, “Beyond Taboo Tattoo”. "I wonder what they would do if I rolled in there wit...
That has to be a slap in the face.
ReplyDeleteAhhhh, Shit. it hurts me too.
ReplyDeleteItinerant, illiterate, stupid women who really know how to hurt a guy, lol.
ReplyDeleteThat would definitely be painful : (
ReplyDeleteThere's no worse hurt for an artist than seeing your work thrown away. Great take on the prompt, Ann! :)
ReplyDeleteOuch. That had to have hurt. Nicely crafted!
ReplyDeleteHeartbreaking! And convincing.
ReplyDeleteOuch...that's harsh!
ReplyDeleteWhere does it hurt? When that happens ALL over! Nicely done. Now my gut hurts, because that is right where this one hit me. (Priscilla...Dessert)
ReplyDeleteHmmm Maybe he'll give the original to some not-so-gorgeous women from now on? Great write, Ann!
ReplyDeleteaww man, poor dude. Hopefully he learned a lesson though!
ReplyDeleteGreat title. I don't understand the scavenger hunt part, but I like how the rest of it and the title really tie in.
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to recreate that scene in Amelie where she paints quotes of her poet friend on the sides of buildings that she knows he'll walk by just to cheer him up. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteDang, that's a painful moment for sure. What an awful feeling. Nice job with your response to the prompt. Thanks for linking it up!
ReplyDeleteNow that is just cruel and a total slap in the face. I feel so bad for him! ♥
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