Love transcends

The human heart ebbs and flows
Somber times and rhythmic beats

Leaping for new life
Jumping to the promise of better

Shackled by reproach's grimness
Limitations borne and imposed.

How well we accept or transcend

Will never eclipse the love we know.


  1. Like the ambition in this piece. Good effort.

  2. It does ebb and flow, doesn't it?

  3. I can feel the heartblood pulsing through these lines. Nicely done.

  4. I think the imposed limitations might be worse. Sometimes, we are our own worst enemies.

  5. I like that we can choose to accept or transcend. As a knuckle-dragger I have been known to make other choices. Perhaps I should rethink some of my choices.

    Great piece.


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