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Zephyr
Zephyr is a soft, peaceful breeze. And I thought it had to be an imaginary animal. For many of you, we will not meet again until the next A...
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This big brute of a biker walks into a bar. To let everyone know he has come to create a little trouble and to stay out of his way. He walk... -
I’ve been to the bridge where the water overflowed. The road with swirling eddies and an ice cold grip Steadying my step the river ca... -
I got these little scutters before my sister passed. I thought they would cheer everyone up in the house. Who knew the person I really got ...
Lovely! Wonderful imagery — I can close my eyes and picture it. :)
ReplyDeletePerfect sounds to fall asleep to! Nice entry.
ReplyDeleteSummer sounds are very nice indeed.
ReplyDeleteTahoe!
ReplyDeletea picture painted in words.
ReplyDeleteShimmering sunset ... beautiful picture.
ReplyDeletebeautiful pic topped by beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteIt can get really windy here in Eastern WA. I deal with it by telling myself I'm really hearing the roar of the surf. I like your ocean references in this piece, and all of the other senses of summer too! Great 33 words!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - I immediately thought of Lake Tahoe as well. Something about the waves and the wind in the pines. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteLovely poetry... and I love the alliterations and cadence... great one
ReplyDeleteBjorn beat me to it. I really liked the alliteration too. Nice pace and beautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteAh, I can hear the summer sounds from here.
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