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Mistakes that almost make me say something.
Sweetie Pie pilfering cat food. She swears the cat food fell into her mouth.. These are mistakes I have been guilty of that I get the urge t...
Sweetie Pie pilfering cat food. She swears the cat food fell into her mouth.. These are mistakes I have been guilty of that I get the urge t...
Lovely! Wonderful imagery — I can close my eyes and picture it. :)
ReplyDeletePerfect sounds to fall asleep to! Nice entry.
ReplyDeleteSummer sounds are very nice indeed.
ReplyDeleteTahoe!
ReplyDeletea picture painted in words.
ReplyDeleteShimmering sunset ... beautiful picture.
ReplyDeletebeautiful pic topped by beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteIt can get really windy here in Eastern WA. I deal with it by telling myself I'm really hearing the roar of the surf. I like your ocean references in this piece, and all of the other senses of summer too! Great 33 words!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - I immediately thought of Lake Tahoe as well. Something about the waves and the wind in the pines. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteLovely poetry... and I love the alliterations and cadence... great one
ReplyDeleteBjorn beat me to it. I really liked the alliteration too. Nice pace and beautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteAh, I can hear the summer sounds from here.
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